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haha i did the whole thing at school,like if i finnished somthing earyl/got bored
the edges got all mesed up as a result of being in my folder so long (but i just croped that off)
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well since its premium membership day i would realy appreciate a critique
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Edward elric from fullmetal alchemist,in a "semi-realistic" style?
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heres some other pencil drawings of mine if u care to look>
the edges got all mesed up as a result of being in my folder so long (but i just croped that off)
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.
.
well since its premium membership day i would realy appreciate a critique
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Edward elric from fullmetal alchemist,in a "semi-realistic" style?
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heres some other pencil drawings of mine if u care to look>
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Well, since it is premium Membership day....
I like all of your stuff, flawed or not, and this is no exception<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>. First of all, I like the fact that you put this through a sepia- toned filter... if you didn't, well it still looks nice. The shading is also very pretty ( as always), and I also like that you left him "unfinished", in a way.
I'm not sure if you were going for a realistic or anime- style look, however, as it seems you've mashed both styles together. The neck is a bit too long for the size of the head, and the lips are too wide. The hair doesn't seem to fit in with the face, and the piece of hair that's sticking up is a bit too long.
That being said, I like this very much, and I can't wait for more drawings from you<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
~ Sealand<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt="" title="Heart"/>